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Tuesday, 6 June 2017

A moment in time.

WALT write "a moment in time" piece of writing.
Specific goals (Please highlight yours)
  • I can support my ideas with detail  (Ideas)
  • I can communicate precise meaning related to the topic  (Vocabulary)
  • I can use language that is suitable to the topic, audience and purpose. (Structure &  Language)

                                                     My Moment in Time

                  At sun rise on a desolate beach a round object sits right in front of me.

I can see what looked like a boulder with BIG patches of smelly seaweed all around it.  Then the boulder slowly cracks open, slimy green ooze comes out smelling like chocolate. Next a monster leg appears out of a crack.

I can hear a cracking sound, the groaning of the monster trying to escape from the egg. There is also the sound of the wind blowing on my head and I can hear the crashing waves on the beach.

I can smell the salty air blowing on my head and the smelly seaweed sitting around egg.
The yummy smelling goo that smells like chocolate and the dead fish lying on the beach.

I can feel the wind blowing on my head and the slimy ooze under my feet. The slimy blue egg yolk all over me and water tacking the sand from under my feet and the other boulders crashing onto the beach.

I can taste the salty air I am breathing in and the egg yolk that tastes like chocolate and I think I have a fish in my mouth and the salty seaweed that was on the fish.

That was the end of my day beside the beach!

The End!
By Taylor

My reflection on this writing:
I have worked towards achieving my goals by:
I have used my senses to explain what I am thinking.

Wednesday, 31 May 2017

Dance Dance Dance!

I’ve enjoyed doing the Hip Hop because I learnt lots of
new moves, my favourite move was the strut.

I’ve been challenged by doing the Cha Cha, because it was hard to do the back to back.

I surprised myself when I did the toe tapping after the strut because I didn't think that I could do it. But I did.

I learnt how to do the Cha Cha because I don't do dance lessons, so it was the first time I had seen it.

I found that the Cha Cha was the harder than the Hip Hop dance because you had to do it with a partner and keep in time.

I would now like to the Hip Hop dance again, because it was so fun to do.

Run Bike Run Writing

WALT use poetic verse to recount an event we participated in.

The Run Bike Run event was usual enough; it had                              
the bridge,  small path,  the annoying bushes,
the teachers and even a lake.
Some red, blue flags and cones on the track.
My friends, my classmates and I did what kids do -  
Played on the path, pedalled as fast as we could.
Ran like the wind, shouted as loud as we could.
Did our best, helped others.
Passed other people, said hi to spectators.
Zoomed past the transition area.
Parked our bikes beside our group’s flag.
Doing their best to get first place.              

Friday, 17 March 2017

Term 1 2017 Goal Review and Next Steps

Term 1 2017 Goal Review and Next Steps

Name:Taylor Foster

Parent Goal(s)
Strategies I can use are:
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have you made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is……...
Keep above on writing with his report.

Keep on focusing and not talking to others.

Student Goal(s)
Strategies I can use are:
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have you made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is……...
Reading at higher level and get above average on my writing.

Focus, not worry about others. Read books for the 40 book challenge.

Thursday, 2 March 2017

Multi Cultural Week

This week I have participated actively in a range of learning experience around ‘Multicultural week’

WHAT: I was involved in a range of learning experiences for Multicultural week. I learnt about Israel, Russia and China.

I learnt how to use chopsticks
I enjoyed learning about different countries.
I was most fascinated by how Israel is very small.

A question I have is how do you float in the Dead Sea?